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i can see you put effort in your work but i don't think you did a very good job with it... you didn't animate the characters that much and their movements lack fluidity. the graphics kinda bothers me and reminds me of those flash submissions done in ms paint so you should consider improving that as well... coz i think art plays a big factor in flash movies like yours and right now it really shows how average or below average the entire movie really was...

i see nothing special with the style and it would really need a lot more improvements...

for your sounds, well, you only have a background music which obviously was the basis and theme of your movie. frankly i think the your choice of music wasn't good and slowed down the pacing of the entire movie.... it made things unfold too slow (as if there was anything that unfolded) thus making your movie a bit boring....

for the violence nothing i could really say about it, but the humor... well... i didn't find it funny at all. try using a different material coz all this is just getting too old... religion and god and everything else related... im sure you could do better. try to think of something more original instead and stop joining the bandwagon of hatefull little people.

i also agree that in a neutral point of view, whether or not you believe in god, this whole movie will still give the impression to a lot of people on how "sinful" or "bad" you are if you get my drift. some will say its stupid and others will praise you for it, but eitherway it would not yield to positive results and it wouldn;t be right to show people these things especially if its only gona stir some controversy and create havoc instead of being constructive... unless that's what you were aiming for... getting some recognition and quick attention.

if you don't do all these things right then you might as well end up with all the other cheap-O's trying use religion to express what they call "fun and humor" to get some attention. if you want to be seen as a real flash artist then use your real talents and SHOW IT... don't just opt for the easy way of getting noticed.

peace!

Lopaxe responds:

Ehm... i kinda agree with u, but i think u relaly rated some stuff too low... I'll work on other video soon. This one was my first music video ever.... I kinda enjoyed it and that was the song that fit my abilities.... On next one i'm plannin of putting more effort and make it better (hope u like metal ^^) and.... and... y the hell u wasted all that time for writing a review for a fucking movie that u didn't even like? U coulda go outside and do something, like master 360 flips or sumthin, u coulda go do some fun stuff.. but u reviewed the damn movie :D:D give me advices on where i have to improve, my master (rofl).

Lopaxe, also, i wish you to find some friends someday

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